Good bye, Owai

This is my last blog post of 2019 and of primary school, I loved my time at Owairaka and just want to say thanks a lot to all of the adult helpers here. Thank you. I loved looking after the chickens, Ginger ninja, Bexie, cream puff and Smokey, I would also like to say good bye to the chickens that past away violet, Dusty and Pepper. Here are my best friends at Owai

Nga Whakaaro, Moari feeling

Writing

As she staggered further into the night, a layer of gloom seemed to settle on her. She stumbled forward and tripped on something dumped on the ground. With a simple push of the tiny shiny button the umbrella popped opened and the most wondrous thing fell out. A small, snow white, fluffy cloud hopped out of the sun lit umbrella. Floating in mid air, as slow as a snail it started hover forward into the night, the minuscule cloud was leading her somewhere, maybe it was going to lead her back home? This is the first paragraph of my writing!

As the night moves on, there's still no sign of anything around her, then a light opens up ahead it must be morning her legs hurt so much she just needed to rest that's when she saw it silhouetted in the illuminating sky the cloud had led her to a house but as it came further into view she saw it was not an ordinary house the paint was peeling off the walls and the whole structure looked as old as time itself. The cloud moved closer, so did she. Soon she was right next to the wall It was then that she heard it… Whispers behind the door! With that the cloud vanished with a pop, panicked she froze with nothing to do but stand there in the middle of nowhere in the forest and listen, nothing happens, had they heard her or had she hallucinated it, there was only one way to find out. As she pushed the door open it creaked on its hinges. No one stood behind the door no footsteps echoed through the house everything was silent, as she walked over the threshold she heard a buzz behind her and she turned expecting to see the open door she had just walked through but instead she saw a grey peeling wall the house had trapped her in! This is the second paragraph of my writing there is still one paragraph that I haven't finished.

BTW there is a sentence in red because we had to use it in our writing!