Show Don't Tell

Show DON’T Tell

• It was cold at the beach

• The freezing water washed up on the sand cooling the ground and numbing my feet!

• The house needed repairs.

• The old, rusty house creaked in the breeze as the wind whistled through the cracked and shattered windows. Dust fell from the rotten ceiling and landed on the moldy carpet.

• Mum was angry.

• Mum's fists tightened into balls and her teeth clenched together as she yelled at me to stop!

• He scored a try.

• As he launched himself for the sideline he could feel every eye on him, he hit the ground and scored the try!